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On the floor
were metal casings
sailing on a
sea of red.

On the chair
was the man
half on, half off
all dead.

On the table
sat a note
written in
his hand.

“My life was cruel,
my life was harsh,
my life I cannot stand.”

On the report
one cop wrote
what the investigator

“The worst suicide
I’ve ever seen,
six shots
through the head.”

All that is necessary for the forces of evil to win the world is for enough good men to do nothing...Edmund Burke

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The following comments are for "Suicide"
by Psycho6058

I like it, but i don't get what's so funny?

( Posted by: Deeha [Member] On: June 5, 2006 )

Lucie thanks, glad I gave you a chuckle.
Deeha, If it really was suicide, do you think he would be able to shoot himeself 6 times? think ab out it.

( Posted by: psycho6058 [Member] On: June 5, 2006 )

That's just like the guy saying to the cops...It was an accident...she fell on to my knife...(26 times?)...I watch a lot of cop shows and things like this do happen...but this one is written in fun and I did laugh...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: June 5, 2006 )

Too funny!
Just like the guy about 8 years ago that accidently killed his boss with 28 blows to his head with a hammer.

too funny!

I liked this,
Metulia Louise

( Posted by: LadyMitulia [Member] On: June 5, 2006 )

Oops! I did it again, and again, and again...

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: June 5, 2006 )

Thank you folks for all the comments, glad you liked it.

( Posted by: Psycho6058 [Member] On: June 6, 2006 )

A Thought
That was just the way suicide is. One minute the person is alive and the next minute their dead. They usually go fast.

( Posted by: USGlen [Member] On: June 6, 2006 )

Clearly, there are degrees of incompetence! lol. This is totally what would happen if I ever gave suicide a shot (or six)!

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: June 6, 2006 )

Dead again
You gave me six laughs! -I only needed one, so I guess I owe you?

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: June 7, 2006 )

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