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Display all that you’ve got from your God
Eloquence in speech shall not be enough
Topple this world with action of yours
Enter the bowl and fight with the odds
Render the duty you ought to deliver
Monger your shyness and bargain for more
Ignite them too, who thinkest but not
Now comes the time for display of tout
Ask thy esteem to come forth and feed
Tell to the earth that you shall not kneel
Instead ask them to leave way of yours
Offer them hence the modest of all
Noble were born and regal be gone

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