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Listen up lovely,
It is raining cold outside,
but it is warm here.

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The following comments are for "Darling, Stay"
by Siah

yes I'll stay!
common sense is very sexy!
..and flirty it rocks!

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: June 5, 2006 )

Loved the idea wording could be a little better.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: June 6, 2006 )

He speaks
Thank you for the comments.
Chapter 1, I see you have taken the time to write again. THanks:D

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: June 6, 2006 )

May I enter?
I don't think that anyone could have defined 'sexy' better-especially without using sick-sexual references. You are a master of the art of poetry, I must commend you.
(And I can sort-of relate to this poem: Louisiana does get rather cold in the winter).

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: June 16, 2006 )

Thanks for commenting. And yes, you may enter whenever you wish:D

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: June 18, 2006 )

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