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A warrior of virtue,
Crimson mastery of lies,
Why fight with the metal sword?

Why fight with the metal sword
Crimson mastery of lies,
A warrior of virtue?

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The following comments are for "Warrior of Crimson Mastery"
by Siah

Two Levels of Meaning
Very good-it is so cool how one can rearrange lines of poetry to make a totally different meaning. A master of the haiku you are, Siah!

-Aubri, a. k. a. "Leopard Lady"

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: June 26, 2006 )

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