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X It is said that a truly broken heart can never fully heal X
Today I met a boy,
Broken heart
I put my heart in that boy,
Broken heart
He ripped it out,
Broken heart
He almost killed it,
Broken heart
Then I killed him!
Broken heart
But that was a sweet dream,
Broken heart
My heart will be broken forevermore!



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