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Far ahead of my range of sight,
Running in the open, nothing but breeze,
Flying with ease, Feeling Free.

Darkness comes, sometimes way too soon,
I am not afraid, each dawn, each ray of new light,
Brings new found wisdom, because I survived the night.

One must die, to be reborn,
So I welcome that death,
Because I will always be,

Running Free.


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