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We say together forever
but I guess thats not what we meant
forever is a long time
and our time together was quick

bonds forged
throughout long nights
we try to hold
you all gave up the fight

We had so much in common
and at times were so alike
but we grew and taught
each other things
like to love and appreciate
life

my love for things
is growing cold
hard to find pleasure
in the simplest of joys

like seeing a flower

or walking in the rain

or waking up one day

to hear you whisper my name

our time is short
we need to make the best of what we have
but to do that I need
all of you
and the energy we once had

------
~~~dream as if you'll live forever...live as if you'll die today~~~


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The following comments are for " Connected"
by twistymisty

Age
Physical age has nothing to do with the part of my mind and soul that writes...that part of me is ageless and cannot be described in any words other than what I have written. If you can't understand it thats ok because you shouldn't really know what I am saying you should draw your own conclusions...well thanks peace

( Posted by: twistymisty [Member] On: May 30, 2006 )





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