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A sharp pair of eyes
Gazing straight at me intensely
Cutting my soul like a knife
Unlocking my heart without a key

Laying beneath me
The mysterious smile I see
Coming from those perfect lips
As if its curved only for me

Taking a good look as I stare back
That vintage jeans and the black speggetti strap
Could not look better on anyone else
Just the look to pierce through my heart

A blazing fire burning inside of me
But I like the way it feels
This wild passion is driving me insane

Unforgettable night
I'm losing myself in this trance
Drowning in those vibrent Green eyes
Once more, give me just one glance


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