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i sat in a cloud
waiting for it to pass
riding its chariot
of bliss full breezez
humming my tune
to kill the wind
and bring it to you
will that be enough
to show you my love
i can kill the wind and bring it back
and i can burn in the sun forever
if it would show my love for you

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i am a misuderstood lunatic


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The following comments are for "killing th wind"
by schindees

so
so i felt like saying somthing random

( Posted by: schindees [Member] On: May 29, 2006 )

my next poem
about peems

( Posted by: schindees [Member] On: May 29, 2006 )

complentation
it means in though or somthing like that complentate your problems

( Posted by: schindees [Member] On: May 29, 2006 )

Schindees
Do you mean "contemplate"? As in, "reflection, thoughtful consideration . . ."?

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: May 29, 2006 )





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