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the clowns have left
the animals starved
the crowds are gone
for long we will stand
till our rusted poll\'s
fall down
upon our long lost rings
we shot each other minuets before
sunries to make sur
that we burned in the sun forever and ever
till th big top falls
we shall burn
in the sunlight forever
together we wil burn for our crimes

------
i am a misuderstood lunatic


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