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Well after nearly a year of living in fear.
I finally have have something I hold dear.
It took a while to shrink it to make it fit.
But when I looked closer I knew this was it.
Something that would tell everyone that Papa rocks.
I took a world of emotion and fit it in a box.
If you have no idea what I'm refering to.
Then this is a waste of time and I'm boring you.

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IN THE END THE LAS WILL BE FIRST.


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The following comments are for "THE PERFECT AVATAR"
by PAPALAS

Perfect avatar
I don't know if I got the correct meaning of the poem, but after searching for the perfect description of self I finally found it, and was able to do what is hard for me; conform to a set standard. Good read.

( Posted by: MsTink [Member] On: May 29, 2006 )

THANK YOU.
AS ALWAYS YOU KNOW THAT YOUR OPINION MEANS ALOT MSTINK.

( Posted by: PAPALAS [Member] On: May 29, 2006 )

perfect avatar
This was cute, but you failed to mention how difficult some sites make it to create an avatar. They all have their own restrictions for size and I don't know about you, but it is a struggle for me to resize my avatars to make them fit. I think their should be a federal law requiring all avatars to be one size.

( Posted by: Psycho6058 [Member] On: May 30, 2006 )

Perfection
Yes mere perfection, lol. I never find the perfect one so I change it all the time! Maybe you could help me pick one out too!

Good write,
Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 30, 2006 )

Gotcha, Papa, but...


I've read this several times
but i did not reply in fear
that I'd misunderstand the symbol
that you seem to hold so dear.
Never for a moment did I doubt that Papa rocks
but dangit for the life of me I can't discern this box.

At first I thought "A scuba flag"
but that could not be right
'cause Papa never spoke of scuba
and the stripe should be all white.
So I googled up the nations
and all their national flags but
I couldn't match your avatar
to none of those proud rags.

So now I'm guessing your proud victory
was to make an avatar.
If it ain't 70 by 70 you ain't gonna get so far.
Now you've framed it and displayed it
and I wish you would explain
your choice of avatar
and is it related to your name?

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: May 30, 2006 )

My Avatar
I'm having trouble with my Avatar. I've got pictures galore but none that are the right amount of pixels. I've tried and tried to find the perfect Avatar for me. Next I'll try a small picture of myself. Oh! I can't wait to have my Avatar in place. I'll feel better then.

( Posted by: USGlen [Member] On: June 7, 2006 )





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