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A Bubble
so perfect
so clear
for a second
then it bursts
and reality settles in

taking a moment
to look back in time
I see my mistakes
and see how I tried
was it worth it at all?
it feels so wrong
one second of peace
then war rages on
time after time
we say the same thing
then you start playing word games
and I go into a rage
I want to go back
to happier times
with my circle of friends
and a world that was mine
but maybe you know,
thats all gone

A Bubble
so perfect
so fragile and thin
something we search for
without and within


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~~~dream as if you'll live forever...live as if you'll die today~~~


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The following comments are for "A Bubble"
by twistymisty

PAPA LIKE.
I LIKED THIS. IT REMINDED ME OF BETTER TIMES.

( Posted by: PAPALAS [Member] On: May 27, 2006 )

Better Times
lol this poem is entierly based on better times in a better life...thanks for recognizing it

Peace out

( Posted by: twistymisty [Member] On: June 4, 2006 )





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