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only one word could suffice
for three words said in between sheets.
a single thought potently
stuck in the stink of this single sin.

You define love,
by how good it feels
to be locked inside someone else.

Lie within this beautiful atrocity,
clutch the emotion quickly..
and feel alive
This crescendo wont last all night

Wrap your heart around his waist.
Beg for the love, let it feed your lungs.
I hope to god, it fills you,
sustains you.

Take it all in.
the intensity of this ever growing
new deficiency inside your twisted perception.
As you touch this...
.love.
I hope you forget to breathe.
I hope as you lie divested in your stranger
You remember passion
With all the waste in my blood
I hope you recollect what it is to feel.



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