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A wraith is a wraith;
Though it may smile, laugh or feel,
It is still mere thought.

Poetry is live,
fluid like a stormy ocean,
and we traverse it.

What is this deity
that smiles with unseen folly
Expecting my faith?

Each day; new and true,
Just as the sun must arise,
Must I awaken.

A stream falls toward
the nearest point of decent,
Much like our beliefs.

Friends, family, foes,
Final ferment; foolishness
from fear and fun.

Becoming a man
is truly hard, harder than
being erectile.

Until the morning
I can dream of your body,
sleeping beside it.

What is supreme joy;
Being fruitful and content?
Or falling in love?

The first love is pure,
like the glance of an infant,
as it smiles with joy.

Be all and know all,
to become master of all;
Is just too boring.

Life is a river,
and if so Iím a cloud,
Floating above all.

All not saved will be lost.

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by Siah

Well done Percy. For me if you had put it all in one or two paragraphs would not have liked it as much.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: May 26, 2006 )

Thank you
Thank you windchime and chapter1, for even reading my haiku. I like haiku, one of my favorite styles. Thank you again.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: May 28, 2006 )

Stepping twice
Cost years
In flowing waters


( Posted by: abbas [Member] On: June 4, 2006 )

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