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I kiss the place where you slept,
Iíll wipe off the tears that Iíve wept,
Youíll never know I was here.
And you will never know the fear.
I do my best to insist,
But do you really know I exist?
You say that you miss me,
And when you leave, you will kiss me.
But do you know how I feel?
Do you think Iím not for real?
Youíre very much mistaken.
And although my love is forsaken,
Maybe some day I will learn,
Until then, let my hurt burn.

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