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What Became of Ladybug

Sheltered in windrow
Caught in bale
Fed to cattle
Dropped on trail

Soon psilocybin
Shaman's tale

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by Flonigus

Windchime - comment notification off?

Ms. Lucie,

Thank you for the insightful comment. I only just noticed that there was one for this piece as I saw the list of my postings (at "Manage Writings") while logged-in and submitting another. Something must be amiss with the email notifications.

~ John

( Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: June 1, 2006 )

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