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How come they didn't last
those heated summers of the past
when we ran barefoot over broken glass.
It didn't phase us then
we didn't mind
pain was unimportant,
especially knowing the twinge would soon end.
Step after step evil slowly sunk in
looked up one day & the devil's your best friend
and everyday we dance to the constant beat of his drum.
It's too late the damage has been done
so much I wish I could go back to that time
when i was naive & young
and only listened to the song my heart sung.
Just look what you've become.


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