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i dont care,
what im goin through,
just as long,
as im here with you.

oh i dont care,
as long as your there,
as long as you hold close,
and tell me your right here.

i dont care,
if your with me still,
i dont care,
if ya say ya love me still.

i know it may not be right,
i know im a just a girl on the side,
i know you love us both its true,
but as long as im in it then baby...

i dont care,
what were going through,
i dont care,
as long as i have you.

i will wait for you right now,
i know we will be somethin somehow,
ill give you sometime
to realize,

i guess ill just be...
the girl on the side..
but baby....
i dont care.....

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~+stephie+~


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The following comments are for "i dont care..."
by grandmasgirl

Catchy tune...
I think this would work with some good music. I would however go back in and edit a little. Example: "your" should be "you're" and "ill" should be "I'll". Read it the first time and thought you were referring to "ill" as in sick.

Write on friend.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 25, 2006 )





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