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slow explosions
tear debris
capturing the moment
of the impact
of my words

slow explosions
a space between
a blink
a tear
tear debris

the silence before and after
fails to ruin the memory
failing at failing at falling in love

slow explosions
tear debris

only a blink

and then it's gone


Forecast is for "bad craziness". - - - Dr. Hunter S. Thompson

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