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Love is not always that perfect
As it seemed in the dream of yours
There might be a bunch of thorns
On every new budding flower

Lady! here comes your prince charming
Get going as he shall not hold long
Not that he dont intends to stop by for
But `coz your dream may not last that long

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The following comments are for "DREAMZ"
by Abbas

Dreams are made of this. Nice and Short. not too long, keeping me with a lasting image. Thanks.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: May 30, 2006 )

Dear Eric
Thanx for a very true comment of yours
and for sure I have a lot to work upon rhymes.

My dad use to say me this "Abbas, Rhyme is what makes a poetry immortal", and you surely remined me of him.


( Posted by: abbas [Member] On: May 31, 2006 )

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