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erase yourself
send me away
in a flustering of words
a flock of gibberish
send me a note
explaining the meaning
of a blank stare
and a wasted touch

erase yourself
take me away
on the back of a lie
riding through
the thousand moons
in a single
vicious
stare

starry-eyed whores
worship a lost cause
a pile on pencils
with worn out
erasers
is all that remains
of a cult you made

come and erase

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Forecast is for "bad craziness". - - - Dr. Hunter S. Thompson


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The following comments are for "pencil eraser cult"
by Adrian Shepard

pencil eraser cult
first prize in good poetry.

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: May 19, 2006 )

eraser-head

Adrian,

Wow this just blows me away! This poem is so loaded with so many stimulating meanings and interpretations of so much lunacy that goes on.

favorite line:

"starry-eyed whores
worship a lost cause"

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: May 20, 2006 )





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