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Darkest hopeful wonder of, exquisite desire for
Outweighs by far the need to love.
Energy succumbs, infuses and surrounds
Potentials yet unfulfilled and ever addicted: yearning.
Tangled limbs, intertwined, inseparable,
Stars disrobe, naked ethereal essence
Their shimmering gowns falling down upon
Divine afterglow, now set ablaze
Blessed in secret kisses, tasting of sacred honeys
Lips, tongues, a soft moan, in searing passion
Bestow the loverís communion.


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"I'm not an artist - I'm a f*%king work of art!"
- Marilyn Manson: (S)aint

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The following comments are for "Transcendence"
by De`esse

miaaah
heya Jess ^_^

Sorry i've been scarce, inspiration had abandoned me... real life interrupted my creative flow, but the mess has slowly sorted itself out, and i am back, and feeling completely free, and happy - not weighed down, and i swear i'm about to fly.

I love this piece... it was inspired by my fascination for the word 'transcendence' mmmmm *purrrr*
sensuality is my mood right now :) in many forms...

( Posted by: De`esse [Member] On: October 3, 2002 )





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