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Better Tomorrow

She can feel the pain
and also the sorrow.
She doesn't want to go on.
So she prays for a better tomorrow.

It's hard for her to cope.
She'd like to runaway.
In her heart she knows
that she can't stay.

You can see the sadness
deep within her eyes.
She would like to stop the madness,
but instead, she just cries.

She prays for strength to move ahead.
To survive another day.
She pleads for the courage to be brave
so she can simply walk away.


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by TravisDPanda

im sorry you have to write about this kind of stuff.. hang in there, id tell you everythings gonna be okay, but i know that would just make you get more upset... im really sorry you have to go through this, just dont give up, God has a reason for everything, although it may seem like he's not with you because of whats going on, he is... everyone on this website who reads your beautiful writtings are with you too!

( Posted by: grandmasgirl [Member] On: May 18, 2006 )

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