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this is just the beginning of a book that i have started writing. please feel free to critique...i think i'll need it.

By: Elisa Henry

This story is probably being told to you in some world that I know not of. My name is Zora. The story you are about to be told is a tale of love, death, treachery, and even adventure. My story starts in the elven country of Greenwell, the morning of my initiation.
“Mother, I would like you to help me. I would be honored if you did.” I said as I studied my self in the mirror. My favorite mirror was the Lorranian mirror above my dresser. The design of blue roses that tangled with black roses is what had always enticed me.

everyone hears what you say...friends listen to what you friends listen to what you don't say...


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