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If I could, I would
Write things of splendor
If I could, I would
Write things so tender

If I could, I would
Think in colors so bright
If I could, I would
Think outside the black of night

If I could, I would
Dream dreams of friends not foes
If I could, I would
Dream nightmares with superheroes

If I could, I would
Feel things so soft and warm
If I could, I would
Feel things other than harm

If I could, I would
Change the way I think and what I say
If I could, I would
Change the wicked ways of world today



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The following comments are for "Would I If I could."
by starstar

If I could
I'd be the smartest, the most intelligent, just to tell you that even smart people can fail at love:D
Anyway, thanks for the poem.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: May 16, 2006 )

Thank you
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.

( Posted by: starstar [Member] On: May 22, 2006 )





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