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That fuckme look
subtle

That sultry move
slightest

That softspit touch
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"All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling" -Oscar Wilde


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The following comments are for "Home Movie"
by MountainBill

Bill, for me?
You surprised me! I thought you were going to post that silly Limbaugh haiku? You are such a sneak! You've gone and made me feel special on Mother's day in a very non-motherly kind of way. ;-} xxooxx

( Posted by: Legs [Member] On: May 14, 2006 )

Successful pornography
in print, is a damnably difficult act to pull off. So I'm faintly surprised to find myself impressed by this. There's something rather stylish in these swift, blatant sentences; sex and sensuality tempered by an unexpectedly subtle sincerity. Works for me.

( Posted by: MobiusSoul [Member] On: May 14, 2006 )

ahem!
Ahem good! MobiusSoul's comment subject title was hard to resist.

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: May 15, 2006 )

Porntastic
Like unseenwriterx, I followed MobiusSoul's comment here. So much in so words, Mountainbill! Something to whisper in your lover's ear in a crowded airport. Or maybe that's just me.

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: May 15, 2006 )

Porn? Ya think so?
hell then I'm given MYSELF an A+!

Thanks to my fans mobius,unseen,viper, and my wendy who inspires the creative home movie director in me.

( Posted by: MountainBill [Member] On: May 16, 2006 )

dedicating time?
OK, If Ashmedai is dedicating something to Viper9, then I'm dedicating my own romantic poem to Viper9 and his new love. Not as eloquent, but shit. Have a fuckin A+ time! ;)

( Posted by: MountainBill [Member] On: August 18, 2006 )

Hi Bill & Wendy....
You guys are still around, I've missed you, you tow were my favorites. Your relationship was so strong and both of you made me laugh as they did others...yeah, well, too bad about my method writing confession...kinda ruined it for you guys, didn't I? And Ashmedai, he was lost too in the process. He was always so romantic, especially with Freja.

Wishing you guys well, and say hi to Mel Brooks for me and Larry David who inspired me to create you all and more, so many now I forget....oh, thee was that Haiku writer that everyone liked, what was her name?

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: August 27, 2008 )





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