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Gray Zone


Pointless like the slug
Only leaving a snotty trail
Where bare feet have walked
Attached to hungry bellied
Sallow faced children.

Where are those who
Click their tongues
Click their remotes
Grow fatter and
With great vigor
spurt opinions
Yet there they sit

Sluggardly-

Growing jowls.


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"If you have the chance to sit it out or dance, I just say Dance." writen by Mark Sanders recorded by LeeAnn Womack


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by BevRaffaele

grey zone
Said well.

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: May 15, 2006 )





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