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From the depth's of Norumonu,
to the isles of Starlights Finding.
Mother earth watches over you,
inside this darkness binding.

Though we feel no warmth of sun,
nor see th clarity of day.
Mother earth will guide your footsteps,
and lead you on your way.

The earth trembles with her anger,
her tears flood the sky.
Her storms are dreadful songs of rage,
and her winds a lullabye.

Now listen to the night-hounds call,
it is a sign of her coming.
Close tight your eyes child of earth and fall,
asleep to Mothers humming.
~Bane

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When you dream, make it a good dream.
For dreams never last.



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