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Shielded from the pain by repression
Grasping for sanity with denial
Life seems so unfair at times
People can be so twisted and vile

Do you ever get over the bad memories
The ones so harsh they are attached to your soul
The ones that control your every emotion and thought
The ones that never seem to let go

They say your childhood forms your life’s foundation
In which you must perform constant repairs
Before an all out self-condemnation
For which no one really cares

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