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And so ends the year that marked the fall of a role model
My seventeenth where I threw away the milk and switched to another bottle
I never did anything wrong in all my sixteen years
To throw it all away for lust brings the shallowest of tears

And so ends the most confusing year of my life
My fortieth year on earth when I lost my wife
When the world turned upside down
And every smile seemed to sink into a frown

And so ends the year when I escaped the envious stalker
My eigtheenth year when I closed my final locker
I know he's still thinking of me right now
I will never quite understand his treatment of me, the why and the how

And so ends the year when I started my band
My nineteenth year when he lent a helping hand
But inside he wasn't the person I thought he was
He remained a twisted child all year, the freaky things he does

And so I allowed the tale of this new year to fold
This could be my last New Year's, more precious than gold
The future winds ahead like a time beaten path
Will I finally succumb to the force of my own envious, child-like wrath?


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