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Wake up, guilty, I live love in sleep.
All held inside, a secret I keep.
When I see you and know we can't be,
I keep to me, thoughts of you and me.
I wish to sleep and to drift away,
To be with you, thinking it's ok.
We all wake up, from forbidden dreams,
But each silence hides my hidden screams.


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The following comments are for "Forbidden dreams"
by ManusFrigus

Very good
i loved it, i feel/felt the same way. nicely done.

( Posted by: deraj [Member] On: May 13, 2006 )

RE: Very good
Thnx deraj, (for the compliment and for reading it in the first place)

( Posted by: ManusFrigus [Member] On: May 16, 2006 )

Same Pic
Same pic, three different dudes from curacao.
Hey man, Manus, Welcome to Lit.org
Welcome to a society of poets and bohemians.
Like the poem,
felt it would have ended with forbidden dreams though.

Siah, Out.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: May 16, 2006 )





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