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Does the mind comprehend the wanderings
of our soul?
Do we surrender to the words
growing old?

Does the wind carry our thoughts away,
as we bow our heads to pray?

Or is another frame flashing before
the mind,
sending a different signal with the
old one left behind.

These are some of the things that leave
me awake at night,
Are they wrong?
Or,
Are they right?



------
Whilst


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whilst
Good questions...there are things on this earth that are never to be known...don't make youself crazy over it...and most times when I set out to pray...my mind wanders in many directions ...I heard from someone once that our mind is like a drunken monkey...we have to sober that monkey up and focus...and as far as surrendering to the words old age ...not me...but I am going with the flow and trying to make the best out of everyday I have left...God Bless and don't worry over the small stuff...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: May 13, 2006 )





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