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I wonder through the abyss of night.
In the distance I see some light.
I follow the sign that Iím not alone.
You are the one who brings me home.

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The following comments are for "Lost"
by Colwyn

Short and open to interpretation. The identity of the "you" referred to in the poem is left for the reader to work out, as is the depth to which the poet intended it to be a literal or metaphorical piece.
I think it's a good poem: you've left me wondering exactly what you meant. And that, I'm sure, is exactly what you intended to do.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: December 31, 2002 )

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