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Beauty

Your lips, your eyes, your soul
Are like a work of art,
The most creative thing of all
Is your beautiful heart.

If you were a painting,
No colours could express
The beauty deep inside you,
A rainbow, nothing less.

If you were a sculpture
The clay could hardly make
Your figure of an angel
Without one mistake.

If you were a euphony
No choir could really sing
All the beautiful music
Your eyes could possibly bring.

So here I am, an artist,
With inspiration beyond belief
But to capture such rare beauty,
I'd have to be a thief.

------
T.D.G.


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The following comments are for " Beauty"
by TravisDPanda

Travis
Wonderful and romantic.

( Posted by: starstar [Member] On: May 16, 2006 )

lucky..
that was beautiful, if only there were more guys like you in the world. the girl you wrote this about is very lucky to have you. tell her i said hi for me... keep writting!

( Posted by: grandmasgirl [Member] On: May 16, 2006 )

Nice
Wonderful and delightful.

( Posted by: Siah [Member] On: May 16, 2006 )





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