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If I Had Known...

if i had known
the last time you made a joke
would have been the last
i would have laughed forever

if i had known
the last time you made me smile
would have been the last
i would have smiled forever

if i had known
the last time you wiped away my tears
would have been the last
i would have cried forever

if i had known
that the last time you held me so tight
would be the last
i would have held on forever

if i had known
the last time you tried to frightin me
would be the last
i wouldn't have been so afraid

if i had only known
that the last time we said goodbye
would have been the last
i wouldn't have let you go

------
T.D.G.


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The following comments are for "If I had known"
by TravisDPanda

T.D.G's last time
I know the feeling. The poem is sweet, sad and direct. Thank you for posting.

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: May 14, 2006 )





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