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The clock is stuck at one,
as I try not to come undone.
With feelings so raw,
that I can feel the coming thaw.
The thaw of my frozen heart,
that with once,I swore not to part.
I had ice water running through
my vains,
nothing could touch me...
now I am going insane.
Your touch,and smile,
make it all worthwhile.
With my emotions entangled,
I will depart with the path
which fate has me strangled.


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