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i wanna sit in the sun,
i wanna be warm next to you,
i want you to comfort me,
like you used to do.

i want you to be visable,
i wanna see your face shining through.
i dont wanna have to think,
about how i lost you.

i want to be left alone,
i want to be wild and free,
i want you there by my side,
to come and rescue me.

i want to look deep into your eyes,
and at least say goobye,
i wish you could hold me close,
and say you didnt die.

i want to talk to you,
like we used to do,
i want you to make a promise,
that you can follow through.

i want you to say that you'll always be there for me,
i want you to be there, in times of need.

i need you to say,
that you'll always love me,
even when im a fool,
you'll understand my mnistakes,
and heel me when my heart breaks.

show me everything i need,
and be there for me,
grams i need you,
i need you please.

please say you'll always love me,
and watch over me.
make me a prmise,
always be there.


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The following comments are for "always be there..."
by grandmasgirl

hey nice job on the poems.

( Posted by: TravisDPanda [Member] On: May 10, 2006 )

thanks panda bear! now wheres your poems? i cant wait!

( Posted by: grandmasgirl [Member] On: May 10, 2006 )

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