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Tonight I have choosen a golden bullet. I carved my initals in it for tonight and I am high tonight. I want to make love to her tonignt,then pop a bunch of pills and cut my wrists. So as she was done she went to crab the gun from her dresser. Everybody has hurt her and said I hope you die! But first I have one thing to say,f##k everybody exept the one I love thats you Brittni. But then she was hurt by her to she said that she would be honest and wasn't. I hope you all are happy now I am dead and goodbye it is all over tonight. So she took the bullet and put it in the gun and said you all are the ones that pulled the triger. Her mom let people hurt her and her dad sat back and listened but,did nothing to help me. Thanks you all for hurting me because now I should let you go for it is time tonight.

P.S. I want you to know you can't trust anyone all they do is pull the trigger.

Nickol Buckler

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