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the milk of human kindness,
the salt of farmers' blood,
a pitcher of brotherhood ale,
the brain of an architect,
slithering, chirping cretins in a blue jay's nest,
a whiff of grape-juice and a civil wafer,
Thai eggplant wrestled from sunburnt soil to a rythym ancient and uplifting,
a lick from the rough tongue of a mongolian saiga,
the sweat of summer road trips,
a lock of red hair from any gentle damsel,
and inky, rotting hours of cultural creation.

mongolian saiga:

"Any intelligent fool can make things bigger, more complicated, and more violent. It takes a lot of courage... and a touch of brilliance to move things in the other direction."

- Albert Einstein

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The Sacred Cheese of Life
hostile days with backpacks. good work.

( Posted by: papillion [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

The Sacred Cheese of Life
a keeper though smelly at times

( Posted by: michaeI [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

I came because your title peaked my interest. I comment because your words brought unrest, and a strange sense of civility- go figure-
(most confounded by "brain of an architect")
You make my brain work, and I like that!

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )

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