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Anger
Poem

In anger, you can break a flower
vase or something precious,
Just think, can you get it back
After it moves on to another brain ?
Anger is the devil that
blows the glow of the mind,
You do something drastic
leaving your sense behind.
Later, you will repent for
what you have done,
While the devil happily
dances for having won.
So next time you get anger,
Just think what had happened
last time,
And what you had achieved or
rather lost by it.
Then you will realise the true
worth of your anger.
If you can ignore and leave
it behind,
It will become an unwelcome
guest in your mind.

By :- GSVK


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http://gsvasukumar.blogspot.com/


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The following comments are for "Anger"
by G.S.VASUKUMAR

G.S. VASKUMAR
good.

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

Anger
GSV...I always try to stop and think before I let anger have it's way...Is it going to ruin a friendship? how much is this going to cost me to replace?...and whenever I buy something I always think about how many hours I had to work to get it...This is a darn good poem...Mr. GSV...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

anger
The one who angers you, owns you.... I like "while the devil happily dances, having won"
this is a good one

( Posted by: songofcree [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

G.S. Vasukumar's Anger
I thouroughly enjoyed this my friend and await your next.

( Posted by: michaeI [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

Anger
I like this piece. It puts anger into perspective and you give the consequences of raging actions.

( Posted by: Deeha [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

food for thought...
enjoyed your poem.

john.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

good
Liked this very much. Anger is an emotion within us all. It is what we do with it, when it surfaces that counts.

( Posted by: Kathie [Member] On: May 4, 2006 )

Unseenwriterx..
Thanks for ur comment.

Mr.GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )

Nitz..Anger.
That's really wonderful to think before u let ur anger have it's way..It is what i tell in this poem. I feel the moment u start to think then anger will subdue.Thanks for ur nice comment.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )

Lucie..Anger
Hi! Lucie, I agree with u, we lose our sense when we fall in love or get anger. I am planning to write one poem on 'Love' too. This one will be a valuable insight for the same.

Take care..

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )

Songofree..Anger.

Thanks for ur comment.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )

Micheal.,Deeha & John.
Thanks for ur comments.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )

Uncontrolled Anger?
GSV,

I liked your poetry and your reasoning behind it however....

I would interprate your meaning purely as uncontrolled anger.

Anger is a very useful emotion, as are all the others. I never want to stop being angry about the things I need to get angry about! But uncontrolled anger is an enemy and several of your lines already commented on show how expertly you portray this.

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )

Ivor..Uncontrolled Anger.
Hi! Ivor, Yes, I am speaking about uncontrolled anger and it is an enemy. We need to get anger, but it needs to be under control.

Take care and keep reading.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: May 6, 2006 )

gsvk

If most people learned to use more of their brains and thought before they committed irrevocable actions caused by rage, they wouldn‘t be in a corner full of repent in a fetal position. Anger is a “healthy” emotion; ask any of our “therapists” in the house. If most of us allowed ourselves to get angry but not “rageful”, we wouldn’t be discussing it so much. But I wouldn’t grieve too much over breaking a flower (lol).

Good write,

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: May 7, 2006 )

Eric and Macbeth.
Thanks for ur comments.

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: May 9, 2006 )





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