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Hurting inside
you know how I feel
You've been there before
pretending it's not real
you act like it doesn't matter
like all your problems will dissappear
is that all I am to you?
a problem in the back of your head?
All I want is your happiness
is that too much to want?
I don't even care about me
I'd be happy living in a dump
if it would make you happy
I could go away disappear
like I was never here
just a breeze on a cloudy day
but I don't think
that's what you truely want
I think your just too scared
to admit that maybe your in love
it's ok I was too
that's why I told you to leave
even though I was really bleeding for you
So now it's down to this
I can see it clear as day
the only question left
is if you want me to stay
tell me soon
tell me NOW!!!
tell me before I go insane.....




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~~~dream as if you'll live forever...live as if you'll die today~~~


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The following comments are for "Insane...."
by twistymisty

i know...
ohh man i know what your talking about misty it is just life and life can just plainly suck eh?

~M~J~

( Posted by: DeMoNiCcHiLd [Member] On: June 16, 2006 )





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