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Loneliness, awaiting
your life goes on,
mine stands still.
Awaiting, awaiting,
the next round of horror.
Flashes, moments,
memories forgotten,
awakening to terror
of nightmares past.
Or are they real?

Blue Sky


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by BlueQueen

Short & Sweet
Flows beautifully, the language is great.

( Posted by: Deeha [Member] On: May 2, 2006 )

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