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venomous juices
churning inside your belly
will eat you alive

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Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "Bubble Stew"
by nitz kitty

Lucie
I wrote this for my dear friend...the Hit and Run attacker... thanks for reading and the comment..Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: May 1, 2006 )

Tap
I wouldn't wish that on anyone...It's just a warning to people who go to bed angry and wake up angry and are angry through out the day...I know because I used to be that person...It's like a cancer that eats you up...It is not good...and I have experienced ulcers ...NOT fun...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: May 2, 2006 )

bubble stew
self inspection self reflection of our real state is always important.

( Posted by: unseenwriterx [Member] On: May 3, 2006 )

So True
Kacee;
Hi, how are you? This is so true, nerves sometimes too can make you feel like that. Sorry about commenting so late, just got back from Pigeon Forge, TN, and Gatlinburg, TN. I like this alot. tried several times to log on and comment. You still have it Kacee, keep on writing and I will keep on reading your work.


Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: May 13, 2006 )

Bubble Stew
Thanks Jeannie,
Good to see you back...love it when you comment...Bless you...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: May 13, 2006 )

Jeanie!!
It is nice to see you back! i've missed your writing.
Nerves, resentments, unforivness and stress - enemies to the spirit and the stomach - no wonder we're told to think on those things beautiful and lovely - mental and physical health!!

( Posted by: The Demure 1 [Member] On: May 13, 2006 )





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