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I wish that you could see the shackles
that bind you to
Past, Present and Future
Fears.
The anger that surrounds you
and holds you captive
to unrelenting
Pain.
I wish that you could feel the freedom
that awaits you
when you allow yourself to
Love.
To experience the feeling of joy
when you truly
Give
beyond yourself to someone else
not just me.
Oh sweet release, sound sleep
beautiful mornings and
Peace.


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