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They hear the story and they cry
They hear the story and they laugh
They have no clue who she is, or what she does
All they know is she lives a sad, lonely life
And to them thats a sad story

They hear my story and they cry

They hear my story and they laugh

They try to fight the tears sometimes

I know what they are thinking, I have

Heard it all before. I know my story is sad

And I live a sad life, and the day I die

I know I will only be remembered as the

Girl who had no life

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