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'Hearts Door'

In the twilight of the mornings dawn,
On the darkside of the stars,
In the silence of a shattered sun,
My hearts door sits ajar.

In the empty rooms on whispered winds,
On angels voice afar,
In the stillness of the moment,
My hearts door sits ajar.

By 'Daggerfall'

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by Daggerfall

Its not cut short...
Its simply that i got that far and felt it had a style and quality i couldnt maintain through more verses, though as you say it has an uncomplete feel so i will endeavour to find more thoughts to bring it out in full.

( Posted by: Daggerfall [Member] On: October 3, 2002 )

I like this piece, and i think that the purpose of it is to be left unfinished, and literally poised on the brink, door ajar but nothing entering, and nothing leaving, secrets still held safe and innocence maintained... i think to add to it would be very difficult to maintain its current level of simple elegance and innocence.

Ju =*_*=

( Posted by: De`esse [Member] On: October 3, 2002 )

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