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Down the winding road of life
Not knowing what's ahead.
Situations, turmoil and some strife-
Maybe happiness, perhaps dread
Each path in life we take,
hoping it will be the right.
Footprints heavy, tho' we make
other times may be light.
The patterns how they change
Depending on each road taken
Some patterns easy
others must rearrange
some totally forsaken.


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The following comments are for "Life's Road"
by SongofCree

Life's Road..
Well, like in Sheldon's novel, life is like a novel filled with mystery. You'll never no what will happen unless you turn next page.

Nice poem.

Mr.GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: May 2, 2006 )

life's road
Thanks! i have been admiring your poetry on risk, tolerance, etc.. I enjoy your positive outlook on life

( Posted by: Songofcree [Member] On: May 2, 2006 )





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