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lord,
you are my God,
you are everything to me...

lord,
you are my God,
you are all that i can see...

lord,
you are my God,
come and rescue me...

i give you thanks,
i give you love,
i give you all thats with in me..

ill give you thanks,
ill give you love,
ill give you everything, that i can be.

because...

lord,
you are my God,
you are everything to me...

because,
lord,
you are my God,
you gave up everything for me...

see forever is your love,
forever i will worship,
forever we are here
forever i will worship you...

lord...
you are my God...

ohhhhhh....
lord...
you are my God...

you gave up everything....
for.. me...


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~+stephie+~


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The following comments are for "you are God"
by grandmasgirl

welldone
you tried a lot to give your poem a sad view,and sure you did but it lacked concentration which is so important to any kind of poem,next time try to spend sometime writing yopur poems

( Posted by: chriss [Member] On: April 28, 2006 )

thanx
okay.. whoever you are.. i didnt spend time to make this song/poem sad.. this is a faster song and i do spend time writting these.. its not like im perfect, i just write down my feelings, you dont hve to revise and put '"big" words in a song or poem to make it sound good.. its more of a worship song you would sing at curch.. thats what i was goin for, but thanx for makin me feel bad

( Posted by: grandmasgirl [Member] On: April 28, 2006 )

Song to God
You go girl...Sing your new song to the Lord...He looks at the heart...not the vocabulary...Bless you...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: April 28, 2006 )

you are God
I've been reading your works, and I like the songs/poems. It was easy to pick up on the worship tone in this piece; overall, it is hard to get past the spelling errors. I still enjoyed reading (and humming) your work.

( Posted by: MsTink [Member] On: May 5, 2006 )





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