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She sold her soul to the devil
and pawned her conscience too,
For with Satan behind her
there's nothing she can't do.

Like the little ol' Black widow
who devours and eats her mate
only to spin another web,
a victim does she await.

She's a mirage in the desert
so luscious and so sweet
the thirsty traveler drudges long
only to find there is no drink.

Beware, she's a charmer
her hypocrisy knows no bound
for if you listen very long
soon there will be no other sound.

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