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i need you
i need you here
i need you
why cant you be here

come back
come back please,
i din't do,

you know i love you
and i need you here,
im just too young,
to have you leave me here.

come back now grams
i didn't do anything,
i dont deserve this torture,
i dont deserve this pain.

i need you right here,
to hold me close.
maybe i should have been,
the one to go...

the drugs he gave
secretly in your drink,
the fight you fought,
but weakly lost,
the ropes he tied you up with,
probley hurting your wrists.
the feeling when he raped you,
that you couldnt escape.
then the gunshots that wounded,
your heart and you head.
hopefully you didn't,
have to bleed to death.

grams, you didn't deserve this,
that day we all lost.

i lost you,
you lost a life,
he lost him self,
and he lost a wife.

we all cryed,
and cryed,
and got into fights,
who did it?
we didnt know,
til they found him face down,
with the gun in his hand.

that fool that killed you,
killed us all that day.
you were his wife,
he was suposed to be nice.
now your gone,
and i don't feel right.

im just a kid,
you were forced to leave me here,
its hard to deal with,
i need you please.

come back,
i wish you could.
come back, i love you so.

grams, be here for me
in times of need,
i know i wont see you,
but still look after me.

you know i love you,
and i need you now.
come back, come back,
i wish you could somehow.


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